1st ever tab, any suggestions/corrections would be greatly appreciated :)

INTRO
"Stabirabi rapstabstabira..."

e|-----------------------------------------------|
B|-----------------------------------------------|
G|-----------------------------------------------|
D|-9-9-9-9-2-2-2-2-7-7-7-7-4-4-4-4---------------|  x2
A|-9-9-9-9-2-2-2-2-7-7-7-7-4-4-4-4---------------|
E|-9-9-9-9-2-2-2-2-7-7-7-7-4-4-4-4---------------|

VERSE
"kin pameul cham monee runda.."

e|-----------------------------------------------|
B|-----------------------------------------------|
G|-----------------------------------------------|
D|-9-9-9-9-2-2-2-2-7-7-7-7-0-0-4-4---------------|  
A|-9-9-9-9-2-2-2-2-7-7-7-7-0-0-4-4---------------|
E|-9-9-9-9-2-2-2-2-7-7-7-7-0-0-4-4---------------|

e|-----------------------------------------------|
B|-----------------------------------------------|
G|-----------------------------------------------|
D|-9-9-9-9-2-2-2-2-7-7-7-7-4~--------------------|  
A|-9-9-9-9-2-2-2-2-7-7-7-7-4~--------------------|
E|-9-9-9-9-2-2-2-2-7-7-7-7-4~--------------------|

PRE-CHORUS
"Stabirabi rapstabstabira..."

e|-----------------------------------------------|
B|-----------------------------------------------|
G|-----------------------------------------------|
D|-9-9-9-9-2-2-2-2-7-7-7-7-0-0-4-4---------------|  
A|-9-9-9-9-2-2-2-2-7-7-7-7-0-0-4-4---------------|
E|-9-9-9-9-2-2-2-2-7-7-7-7-0-0-4-4---------------|


CHORUS
"ahpeun sarang aa.."

e|------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|------------------------------------------------------------------|
G|-6-6-6-6-------------------------4-4-4-4-4-4-4-4------------------|
D|-6-6-6-6-7-7-7-7-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-4-4-4-4-4-4-4-4-4-4-4-4-7-7-6-6--|  x2
A|-4-4-4-4-7-7-7-7-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-4-4-4-4-7-7-6-6--|
E|---------7-7-7-7-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-----------------4-4-4-4-7-7-6-6--| 


and then you just repeat the verse and pre-chorus. 
the chorus repeats until the song ends. 
-Louie