look the chorus, it's the only wrong thing in your version (i think)
Verse/intro
G|--------------------|---------------------|
D|--------------------|------------------0--|
A|----------0h1-0-----|---2--00--2--2-------|
E|----0--3---------03-|---------------------|

"this is the noise...."
G|-------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|-------------------------------------------------------------------|
A|--0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-3-5-5-5-5-5-5-5-5--|
E|-------------------------------------------------------------------|

Chorus
G|-----------------|----------|-----------------|----------------|
D|-----------------|------0---|-------0-2-0--0--|-----0-0--------|
A|-------0-1-0----3|-0-3-3-0--|-----3------3----|--3-3---0-------|
E|---0-3--------3--|----------|-----------------|---------0------|