this is my first tab so please give me feedback the open e and open a the base plays i 
but it sounds fine on the guitar

e|---------------------------------------|
b|--------3-2-0------------------3---2---|
g|-4-4-4p2------2-2-4-4-4p2-2------------|
d|----------------------------2/4--4-----|
a|0--------------------------------------|
e|0--------------------------------------|