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Guitar 1- palm muted
e-----------------------------------------
b----------5---------7-----7-5---5--------
g----6------------------------------------
d--4---7-6---7-6-4-4---6-7-----6----------
a-----------------------------------------
d-----------------------------------------     x 2

e------------------------------------------
b----------5-------------------------------
g----6-----------------9-----9-----9--9----
d--4---7-6---7-6-4-4---7-----7-----7--7----
a------------------------------------------
d------------------------------------------

Guitar comes in after the bass with a slide down from 12 with palm mutes after
e-----------------------------------------
b-----------------------------------------
g-------------------------------------------
d---------------------7-7-7---------------------
a-12----4-4-4--7-7-7--5-5-5---------------------
d-12----4-4-4--7-7-7----------------------------

e---------------------------------------------------
b---------------------------------------------------
g-----2-1---------2-1---------6-4---------6-4-7-6--- x 2
d---4-----4-2---4-----4-2---7-----7-6---7-----------
a-------------------------5-----------5-------------
d-4-----------4-------------------------------------


the is the patern, just listen for it.
e------------------------------------------
b------------------------------------------
g------------------------------------------ and the last bar cord on the fourth fret 
d----------------------------7-777-7------- will be the beginning of the second measure
a--4-444-444-444-44-7-777-77-5-555-5-2-4---  <--------
d--4-444-444-444-44-7-777-77---------2-4---  <--------

e---------------------------------
b---------------------------------
g--------------------------------- x2
d---------------------------------
a--2-2-444-2-2-777-2-2-444-4-2----
d--2-2-444-2-2-777-2-2-444-4-2----

Chorus
e---------------------------------------------------
b---------------------------------------------------
g---------------------------------------------------  x2 
d---------------------------------------------------
a--------0-4-0-55-44-22-00-22-00----2-44-2-44-2-4---
d--2-4-6-------------------------66-2-44-2-44-2-4---

Guitar two - One little part before the next verse
e-----------------------------------------------------
b----7......9......10......---------------------------
g-----------------------------------------------------
d-----------------------------------------------------
a-----------------------------------------------------
d-----------------------------------------------------

e-----------------------------------------------------
b-----------------------------------------------------
g---------------------------6666-4444-----------------
d--4444-7777-6666-4444-4444-----------7777------------
a-----------------------------------------------------
d-----------------------------------------------------

You get the idea.