catchy groove, i think this dead on.  play the notes slightly staccattoed and listen to 
song for corect timing.
rest for the fourth measure and dont play 2 Ds in a row the first time through.

]-----------------------]-----------------------]-----------------------]]-----------------------]
]-----------------------]-2---2-----------------]-----------------------]]-----------------------]
]----3---5---5---3------]---------5---5---3-----]----3---5---5---3------]]-----------------------]
]-5------------------5--]---------------------5-]-5------------------5--]]-0--3--5---3--5--------]

have fun.  if you think this is wrong leave a correction/suggestion but bashing it 
help anyone.