ok this is a little song i wrote myself....i know its not that great but its my first song and i just wanna know what people think about it. So if you could please either send me and email or something...knoblet2005@yahoo.com cheers all 

Downstroke: v
Upstroke: ^
Blunt string: x
Bend: b
Release bend: r
Hammer on: h
Pull off: p

Intro part 1:
      vvvv^^^^   vvvv^^^^   vvvv^^^^  vvvv^^^^
e-|---12-----12--10-----10--8------8--7-----7-- 
b-|----12---12----10---10----8----8----7---7---   X2
g-|-----12-12------10-10------8--8------7-7----
d-|------14----------12--------10--------9------
a-|--------------------------------------------------
e-|--------------------------------------------------
 Intro part 2: 
 all the next are down strokes:
e-|---12----12----12----10----10----10----8----8----8----7----7----7----7
b-|----12----12----12----10----10----10----8----8----8----7----7----7---7
g-|-----12----12----12----10----10----10----8----8----8----7----7----7--7
d-|------14----13----12----10----11----10----10---9----8----9----8----7-7
a-|--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
e-|--------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Bridge:

e-|---------------------------------------------
b-|---------------------------------------------
g-|---9--7--5--4------------------------------
d-|---------------------------------------------
a-|---------------------------------------------
e-|---------------------------------------------

Verse:  
     v v^  vvvv  v v^  vvvv  v v^  vvvv v v v v^v
e-|------------------------------------------------------------
b-|------------------------------------------------------------
g-|--7-77--555x--7-77--555x--7-77--555x--7-5-3-222
d-|--7-77--555x--7-77--555x--5-77--555x--7-5-3-222    X4
a-|--5-55--333x--5-55--333x--5-55--333x--5-3-1-000
e-|-------------------------------------------------------------

Chorus: And here is the main problem……I don’t have one so if any of you can think of something let me know please :P cheers 

Solo:

e-|-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
b-|--15-15-15-13-11-10b-r---15-15-15-13-11-10b-r ---15-15-15-13-11-10b-r----------------------
g-|-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
d-|-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
a-|-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
e-|-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
          on the bend at 10, bend it up to 11 and then release quickly.

e-|--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
b-|--15-15-15-13-------15-15-15-13-------15-15-15-13-------------------------------------------
g-|-------------15b---------------15b-----------------15bh17p15h17p15h17p15-15-14b-------------
d-|--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
a-|--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
e-|--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------


ok well that’s it…I know the solo is lame but I can work on it…let me know what you think guys…thanks for reading it. 
Oh Yeah the layout is:

Intro 1
Intro 2
Bridge
Verse
Bridge
Chorus 
Bridge 
Verse
Bridge
Chorus
Solo

Thanks again !! ?