Yay this is basicly right. To make it sound more like the actual solo you should slide 
the whole of it but it doesn't really sound great unless you have the rite effects. So 
pick it all as i've put

E)---------------------------------------------------------------------)
B)10--10-12-13/15-13-12----------------10-12-13/15-13-12---------------)
G)----------------------12-13/16-13-12-------------------12-13/16-13-12)
D)---------------------------------------------------------------------)
A)---------------------------------------------------------------------)
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Thanx alot. If it's compltely wrong then e-mail me the corrsectiosn or tell em to kill 
totallyph@hotmail.com. its an msn address so add me if you like i like to meet new people 
anywhere.