here is a song that i wrote, please provide feedback on it!


Capo on third fret:

  A            G                D                 E
Here, here I lay, here I lay crying, I'm crying away.
  A           G                 D               E
Here, here I lay, here I lay dying I'm dying today.
  A           G                   D                 E
Here, here I lay, here I lay wasting, I'm wasting away.
  A           G                  D              E
Here, here I lay, here I lay hoping, hoping I pray.
            A                G                     D                                 E   
I pray for joy, I pray for peace, I pray for everything, everything that brings me life.


             A                 G                 D                      E
I pray for truth, I pray for love, I pray for anything, anything that works.
  
            A               G                  D                    E
I pray for joy, I pray for peace, I pray for truth, and i pray for love.

             A                G                D                 E          
I pray for love, I pray for life, I pray for life, and I pray for you.
          A                G                   D                     E
Because you, you're all I want, you're all I have, and you're all I need.
A                    G                 D                    E
You, you're killing me, you're killing me, from the inside out.

            A           G                D                     E
Because of you, here I lay, here I lay crying, I'm crying for you.
            A           G                D                   E
Because of you, here I lay, here I lay dying, I'm dying for you.
            A           G                D                  E
Because of you, here I lay, here I lay wasting, wasting my time
            A           G                D               E
Because of you, here I lay, here I lay hoping, hoping I live.
        A              G               D             E
Because I, I want to live, I want to live, live for you.

  A           G                 D                E
Here, here I lay, here I lay crying, I'm crying away.
  A           G                 D              E
Here, here I lay, here I lay dying I'm dying today.
  A           G                 D                  E
Here, here I lay, here I lay wasting, I'm wasting away.
  A           G                 D               E
Here, here I lay, here I lay hoping, hoping I pray.

  A           G                 D                    E
Here, here I lay, here I lay crying, I'm crying for you.
  A           G                 D                  E
Here, here I lay, here I lay dying, I'm dying for you.
  A           G                 D                  E
Here, here I lay, here I lay wasting, wasting my time.
  A           G                 D                E
Here, here I lay, here I lay hoping, hoping for you.
        A              G               D             E
Because I, I want to live, I want to live, live for you.
     A           G                 D                   E
So here, here I lay, here I lay writing, writing this song.
  A           G                 D                 E
Here, here I lay, here I lay crying, I'm crying away.
  A           G                D               E
Here, here I lay, here I lay dying, I'm dying today.
  A           G                D                    E
Here, here I lay, here I lay wasting, I'm wasting away.
  A           G                 D              E
Here, here I lay, here I lay hoping, hoping I pray.