I would like you guys to take a look at this song, maybe play it and thewn tell me how i can improve it or somethoing because i just started and i want to make a few songs cause i can write lyrics.


intro

e--3----3-------3----3--------0-----0-----3------3----3----3---
b---2-----2------2-----2-------2-----2------0-----0----2----2-
g----1------1------1------1-----1-----1------1-----1----0----0
d------------------------------------------------------------------
a-----------------------------------------------------------------
e------------------------------------------------------------------
verse 1
e--3-------3------3------0------3------3-----3-------
b--2-------0------0------2------2--------2----0------
g--1-------1------1------1------1----------1----1----                 x2
d-------------------------------------------------------
a--------------------------------------------------------
e--------------------------------------------------------
verse 2
e--0---0---3-------3---0-0---
b-------------2-----2----------
g---------------1---1----------
d------------------------------
a-------------------------------
e-------------------------------

verse 3

e--3-----3-------3-------3-----3-------3
b----2-----2-----2-------0-----2-------0
g------1-----1---1-------1-----1-------1
d------------------------------------------
a------------------------------------------
e------------------------------------------


outro

e--3----3-------3----3--------0-----0-----3------3----3----3---
b---2-----2------2-----2-------2-----2------0-----0----2----2-
g----1------1------1------1-----1-----1------1-----1----0----0
d------------------------------------------------------------------
a-----------------------------------------------------------------
e------------------------------------------------------------------



play all these

intro
intro again
verse 1
verse 1
verse 2
verse 3
verse 2
verse 3
outro

Chris Williams-