This is a song I am working on and thinking of showing the band (we are metal). so i want your comments and suggestions, and your opinion on if i should show the band, or if i should or shouldnt use certain riffs, ect. All comments opinions, suggestions, are very much welcome and appreciated. So let me know what Riffs are good, and which arent. Thank you. Tuning is Drop C (CGCFAD) "6th string dropped 2 steps, then the rest dropped one step" Key: .=palm mute p=pull off h=hammer on /=slide down neck =slide up neck hb=half bend fb=full bend v=vibrato ~=let ring x=stop note from ringing x//////=pickslide *=side note Intro riff D----------- A----------- F----------- C-3-x////// G-3-x////// C-3-x////// Riff 1 D---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- A---------------------------------------------------------------------------11-10-------- F----------------------------------------7-9fb-9h10p9------------------10-12-----12-10-9v C----5-7-3-5-2h3p23h5p32h3p235---7-8-6-7------------10v-----8-10-10-12------------------ G-5-7--------------------------7-8-----------------------8-10---------------------------- C---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- . . . . . . Riff 1 con. D--------------------------------- A--------------------------------- F--------------------------------- C---------10-8-7-5h7p53h5p32h3p2-- x2 G---10-8-7----------------------3v C-00------------------------------ .. Riff 2 D----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- A----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- F----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- C-0000-0000-0000-0000----5-7-0000-0000-0000-0000----7-8-0000-0000-0000-0000-----8-10 G-0000-0000-0000-0000-5-7----0000-0000-0000-0000-7-8----0000-0000-0000-0000-8-10---- C-0000-0000-0000-0000--------0000-0000-0000-0000--------0000-0000-0000-0000--------- .... .... .... .... . . .... .... .... .... . . .... .... .... .... . . Riff 2 con. D------------------------------- A------------------------------- F------------------------------- C-0000-0000-0-0-------10-7-3h5p3 G-0000-0000-0-0-10-8-7---------- C-0000-0000-0-0----------------- .... .... . . Riff 3 D----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- A----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- F----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- C-5-0-0-7-0-0-8--0-0-0-0----5-7-7-0-0-8--0-0-10-0-0-0-0----7-8-10-0-0-12-0-0-13-0-0-0-0-----8-10 G-7-0-0-8-0-0-10-0-0-0-0-5-7----8-0-0-10-0-0-12-0-0-0-0-7-8----12-0-0-13-0-0-15-0-0-0-0-8-10---- C---0-0---0-0----0-0-0-0----------0-0----0-0----0-0-0-0-----------0-0----0-0----0-0-0-0--------- . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Riff 3 con. D---------------------------------- A---------------------------------- F---------------------------------- C-10-0-0-8--0-0-7-0-0-5-0-0-------- G-12-0-0-10-0-0-8-0-0-7-0-0-------- C----0-0----0-0---0-0---0-0-10-8-7v . . . . . . . . -Repeat Riff 1 Riff 4 D----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- A----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- F----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- C-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0----5-7-000-0-000-0x--0-0----7-8-000-0-0-000-0-0-000-0-0-----8-10 G-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-5-7----000-0-000-0x--0-0-7-8----000-0-0-000-0-0-000-0-0-8-10---- C-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0--------000-0-000-0x--0-0--------000-0-0-000-0-0-000-0-0--------- . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ... . ... . . . . . ... . . ... . . ... . . . . Riff 4 con. D------------------------------- A------------------------------- F------------------------------- C-0000-0000-0-0-------10-7-3h5p3 G-0000-0000-0-0-10-8-7---------- C-0000-0000-0-0----------------- .... .... . . -Repeat: Riff 2 and Riff 3 Riff 5 D---------------------------------------------- A---------------------------------------------- F------------------------------<4>v------------ C-0~7-5-3-2-2~3~5-3--0~7-5-3-2-----3~-2~~~----- x2 G-0~--------3~3~---3-0~------------3~-2h3~----- C-0~----------3~-----0~------------3~-2~~~-<3>v Solo Riff D-15fb-15-------------------------------------------17h18p1720hb A--------18------17-18-20-22----------15-17-17h18p17------------ F-------------------------------14-17--------------------------- C----------14-17------------14-17------------------------------- G--------------------------------------------------------------- C--------------------------------------------------------------- D-17-20-------------------------------------15h1718-15-17-18-17-13-15b-12-13-15----------- A------17-20------------------------------------------------------------------------13-15v F-----------17-19------------17fb-17fb-15-17-----------------------------------12-15------ C----------------17-19-------------------------------------------------------------------- G---------------------17-20v-------------------------------------------------------------- C--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- D-10-12-13hb-8v15-15b-20fb-20fb-17-18-15-17------------------------------------ A-------------------------------------------15h1718v-17h18p1718h20p1817h18p17--- F----------------------------------------------------------------------------19v C------------------------------------------------------------------------------- G------------------------------------------------------------------------------- C------------------------------------------------------------------------------- D----------------------------------------------------------666-----101010------121212 A-------------------------------------------------6hbv------------------------------- F-17-19-14-17----------------2-4-3-5-------2-4-3-5----5h7p5---7h9p7------9h10p9------ C------------14-17----5-7-2-4-------5-7-2-4------------------------------------------ G-----------------15/---------------------------------------------------------------- C------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ . . . .. . . . D-15fb/-----------------------------------------------------15b-15b-15-17-18-17v-17-18-20-18v A------------------------------------------------------------x*-x---------------------------- F------3h5p35/77h9p79109h10p91012-121212121414141415151515--------------------------------- C-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- G-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- C-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- * Here you hit open, but you bend the D string far enough to cancel out the sound. D-20fb/--------------------------------------------------------------------------------- A------232220------181715131513101110---5656hbv----------------------------------------- F------------211917------------------797-------22224444-------------------------------- C------------------------------------------------------22224444------------------------ G--------------------------------------------------------------3333555557v--78v-810v C-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ........................ D------------------------------------8106h8p65h6p5-----------81010h12p1013hb-----------810 A------------------8h10p8-1311----810-------------1311----810---------------1311----810--- F-------------7h9p7-----------7957--------------------7957----------------------7957------ C-------7h10p7---------------------------------------------------------------------------- G-7h10p7---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- C----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- D-6h8p65h6p5-----------81010h12p1013hb-15-17-18-17---17h18p17------------------------ A-----------1311----810---------------------------18v--------20v-20-18-17-15-17fbv~~- F---------------7957----------------------------------------------------------------- C------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ G------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ C------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ D-15-17-18-17---17h18p1720fb-22-20-18-17-18fbv~-17171717181818182020202022/ A------------18v----------------------------------------------------------- F-------------------------------------------------------------------------- C-------------------------------------------------------------------------- G-------------------------------------------------------------------------- C-------------------------------------------------------------------------- Interlude Riff D-------------------------------------------------------------- A-------------------------------------------------------------- F-7-7-7-9-9-9-10-10-10-10-10-10-7-7-7-9-9-9-10-10-10-12-12-12~~ C-x-x-x-x-x-x-x--x--x--x--x--x--x-x-x-x-x-x-x--x--x--x--x--x--- G-5-5-5-7-7-7-8--8--8--8--8--8--5-5-5-7-7-7-8--8--8--10-10-10~~ C-------------------------------------------------------------- Solo Riff 2 D-17hb-12-13-15--------------------------12-13fb-10-12-13-----13-15fb------------- A--------------13-15----------------13-15----------------11-13------------15-17-18 F-------------------12-14fb-12-14-15---------------------------------14-17-------- C--------------------------------------------------------------------------------- G--------------------------------------------------------------------------------- C--------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Solo Riff 2 con. D-1820-20v-17-18fb-18h20p18-15------------------------------------------- A------------------------------17-18fb-18-20p18p1720p18p1720p18p1720p18p17 F------------------------------------------------------------------------- C------------------------------------------------------------------------- G------------------------------------------------------------------------- C------------------------------------------------------------------------- Solo Riff 2 con. D--------------------------------------------------------------------------------- A-18p17p1518p17p1518p17p1518p17p15--------------------------------20h22p2020h22p20 F---------------------------------19p17p1519p17p1519p17p1519p17p15---------------- C--------------------------------------------------------------------------------- G--------------------------------------------------------------------------------- C--------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Solo Riff 2 con. D-----------------20h22-22fb-22h24-24fb-24-222422202220182018171817151715131513121312 A-20h22p2020h22p20------------------------------------------------------------------- F------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ C------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ G------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ C------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Solo Riff 2 con. D-10121081086865653531313fb-3-10--------------------10--------------------10---- A--------------------------------11----------10h11p10--11----------10h11p10--11-- F----------------------------------1210h12p10------------1210h12p10------------12 C-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- G-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- C-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Solo Riff 2 con. D-----------------10--------------------------- A---------10h11p10--11----------10h11p10-11fbv~ F-10h12p10------------1210h12p10--------------- C---------------------------------------------- G---------------------------------------------- C---------------------------------------------- Repeat Riff 5 End on: D--- A--- F--- C-0~ G-0~ C-0~ Get some feed back if you like. Well there you have it. Comments suggestions and what not are very well accepted, Email me at Endofheartaches@aol.com if you need anything else music related, or to chat about music, ect. rock on people!