rate and comments appreciated

This is the main theme music to the game (and i think its the theme for the Lao Shan Lung)

Heres how I figure it to be:

I use lots of distortion and different effects cuz i like it METAL


i use D# and E# chprds for the build up - after, start the riff with a big pick scrape.


                             Sweep
E|-----------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|-----------------------11~-11------------------------------------------|
G|-8-xx-8h10*--8----8h10-------10p8h10---8h10h11*--11p10p8h10-/6---------|
D|-8-xx-8--------11-------------------11-------------------------/8~~----|
A|-----------------------------------------------------------------------|
E|-----------------------------------------------------------------------|

                                                          (/13-11*~~)
E|---------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|-----------------------11~-11-------------------6-7-9~~-/18-16*~~~---|
G|-8-xx-8h10*--8----8h10-------10p8h10----8-10-11~---------------------|
D|-8-xx-8--------11-------------------11-------------------------~~----|
A|---------------------------------------------------------------------|
E|---------------------------------------------------------------------|